Details Do Matter - Tips for Authors

Many times, you only get one shot at querying an agent or a publisher. Make sure you have done everything you possibly can to make your submission and correspondence as polished as they can be. Formatting problems make your work look unprofessional.

Emails/Query Forms

  • Make sure all names and titles are spelled correctly.

  • Verify that the email address is correct.

  • Verify that the name on the query matches the person you’re sending it to.

  • Keep a list of the agents/agencies you query, the date sent, and any response.

  • Follow all submission requirements.

Manuscript

  • Follow standard formatting rules.

  • If not specified, use Times New Roman 12 point (black). Don’t use multiple fonts or fancy types or colors.

  • Make sure you have a cover page.

  • Margins need to be one inch on all sides.

  • Put the page number and the author’s last name in the footer.

  • You need a cover page with your title, word count, and contact information. The page numbering should start on the first page of your manuscript (not the cover page).

  • Most agents/publishers want manuscripts that are formatted for an automatic tab indent for each new paragraph (instead of using the tab key each time or the space bar).

  • Don’t use the return/enter key to move to the next page. Add a hard return (Usually Control + Enter).

  • Use only one space after all punctuation.

  • For American writers, end punction (commas and periods) go inside the quotation marks.

  • Make sure your work has been edited and proofed before you submit it. Print it out and do one last check before you send it.

The little things do matter and show that you’ve invested the time to make your work the best it can be. If you have formatting issues with your word processor, there are lots of good how-to videos on YouTube or the Microsoft Help site for Word.

#ThisorThatThursday Author Interview with Mark Levenson

I’d like to welcome author, Mark Levenson, to the blog for #ThisorThatThusday!

A few of your favorite things: My family, my books (that I own, not that I’ve written), my dog, family mementos including my grandfather’s racoon coat (circa 1925).

Things you need to throw out: Nothing. That gives me and my wife something to discuss passionately.

Things you need for your writing sessions: An endless supply of coffee, music

Things that hamper your writing: Anything that’s not coffee or music.

Things you love about writing: When I’m in the moment, it’s a great rush. When readers get what you’re trying to say.

Things you hate about writing: When they don’t, when something that’s important to me doesn’t engage the reader.

Hardest thing about being a writer: Motivation to keep going when the writing isn’t going well, or when life intrudes.

Easiest thing about being a writer: The freedom to write about absolutely anything.

Favorite foods: cholent (go ahead, ask), pecan pie, Brussels sprouts

Things that make you want to gag: starbucks frapo-crapo drinks

Favorite music or song: klezmer, ragtime (especially a tune called Solace), American songbook, classic rock

Music that drives you crazy: that stuff the kids are listening to

Something you’re really good at: puppet theatre, magic

Something you’re really bad at: drawing, team sports

Something you like to do: taking the dog for a long walk on Long Island Sound

Something you wish you’d never done: Wasted all that time not writing

Things to say to an author: What insight you have into the human condition!

Things to say to an author if you want to be fictionally killed off in their next book: That last one wasn’t quite your best, was it?

Favorite places you’ve been: Positano, Italy

Places you never want to go to again: Tahlequah, Oklahoma

Favorite books (or genre): Mystery (esp Trent’s Last Case), scifi/fantasy (esp Neil Gaiman), Yiddish (Sholem Aleichem)

Books you wouldn’t buy: self-help

Favorite things to do: Walking with the dog (per above), reading a great mystery story

Things you’d run through a fire or eat bugs to get out of doing: helping my wife with home improvement projects

Things that make you happy: my wife and kids, friends, theatre, the morning paper (a real paper, not a website),

Things that drive you crazy: stupidity

About Mark:

His Jewish-themed fantasy writing has won honors from The National Foundation for Jewish Culture and the American Jewish University, as well as a Union Internationale de la Marionnette-USA Citation of Excellence, an award founded by Jim Henson.

Levenson’s novel, The Hidden Saint (Level Best Books, February 2022), is the culmination of his more than 20 years of engagement with Jewish folklore. Levenson wrote The Return of the Golem and The Wise Men of Chelm for the stage, and adapted S. Ansky’s The Dybbuk for actors and puppets. His Jewish-themed short fiction credits include Mystery Weekly Magazine, Kindle Kzine, and Ami Magazine. He also blogs about Jewish fantasy for The Times of Israel.

Levenson began his career as a reporter for The Miami Herald and Dun’s Review. He has written for New York Magazine, The Philadelphia Inquirer, The Forward, The Jewish Week, the Associated Press, Puppetry InternationalStevens Magic, The American Kennel Club GazetteThe Oregonian, and others. He heads the marketing and PR firm The Levenson Company, whose clients have included Amazon, Microsoft, Intel, and Cigna. Levenson served as director of press relations for The Wharton School at Penn, and director of public relations for the Oregon Art Institute. He also served on the boards of the Jim Henson Foundation and the American Jewish Committee.

Perhaps Levenson’s interests in fantasy and folklore are in his blood; his paternal grandmother was a magician, “Lightfingers Ida,” whose tutelage sparked his lifelong interest in magic. His great-great-uncle (on his mother’s side) was a strongman in a Russian circus who could hold back galloping horses and survive sledgehammer blows by peasants who smashed rocks on his chest, except for the last time.

Although Levenson’s physique gives no hint of this lineage, it was a circus sideshow that sparked another lifelong interest, that of puppetry. Levenson writes for and about puppet theatre, was guest curator and catalog author for the exhibition “Winners’ Circle” at the Center for Puppetry Arts in Atlanta, and a contributor to the World Encyclopedia of Puppetry. He was the featured Punch & Judy performer at the Philadelphia festival marking the 250th anniversary of the first performance of that classic puppet play in America.

Levenson was graduated from Cornell University. He and his family (including their adorable pup Roee) live in Westchester County, New York.

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#WriterWednesday Interview with Maddie Day/Edith Maxwell

I’m so excited to welcome one of my favorite authors, Maddie Day/Edith Maxwell back to the blog for #WriterWednesday!

First, thanks so much for inviting me over to This or That Thursday, Heather! I’m delighted to be here, and I hope readers keep going to the end (hint – there’s a giveaway!).

Favorite thing to do when you have free time: Read a mystery while sipping wine.

The thing you’ll always move to the bottom of your to do list: Going through boxes of mementos from the past so my sons won’t have to do it later. I linger, I can’t make decisions, and I wind up paralyzed. So I close the box and put it back on its shelf.

Things you will run to the store for at midnight: That’s easy – I will never run to the store at midnight unless a baby is sick!

Things you never put on your shopping list: Rice-a-Roni, Bisquik, Hamburger Helper – anything that’s a shortcut to real food.

Favorite snacks: Dove Dark Minis, Cape Cod reduced-fat potato chips, and freshly popped popcorn with salt.

Things that make you want to gag: Raw squid on sushi, raw oysters, and raw onions. I guess it’s a raw thing!

Something you’re really good at: Making a perfect pie crust and growing sweet gold cherry tomatoes.

Something you’re really bad at: Anagrams. I love crossword puzzles and Scrabble, but I can’t anagram on the fly.

Something you wanted to be when you were a kid: A teenager. Is that the weirdest aspiration you’ve ever heard of, or what?

Something you do that you never dreamed you’d do: I never dreamed I would have a career writing stories that people love to read – and make decent money doing it, too.

Something you wish you could do: Sing beautifully or play a musical instrument –

beyond the kazoo.

Something you wish you’d never learned to do: Um…oops. I can’t think of anything I’ve learned to do that I regretted.

Last best thing you ate: My own chocolate-chip banana bread – yum!

Last thing you regret eating: That handful of crackers that were a bit stale but I was so hungry, I ate them anyway.

Things to say to an author: “Your book got my through my mom’s surgery/my weeklong stay in the hospital/the latest quarantine after a COVID exposure/a tough time in my life.”

Things to say to an author if you want to be fictionally killed off in their next book: “I have this great idea for a book – why don’t you write it for us?”

Favorite places you’ve been: Rural Japan, Sequoia National Park, western Puerto Rico (where my younger son lives).

Places you never want to go to again: Las Vegas! It’s American culture at its worst.

Favorite things to do: Gaze at my sons’ faces, walk on a quiet trail in nature, and cross-country ski on a fresh snow.

Things you’d run through a fire or eat bugs to get out of doing: Argue politics with my neighbors – or anyone, really.

Best thing you’ve ever done: I raised two fine sons, who are now happy, healthy, productive adults. It’s the best and hardest job I’ve ever had.

Biggest mistake: Not joining Sisters in Crime earlier than I did.

Most daring thing you’ve ever done: When I was young and brave and living on a shoestring, I hitchhiked from San Francisco to Orange County with a friend and my sister, from Michigan to California with a woman I met on a ride board, and in northern Japan alone. And I survived!

Something you chickened out from doing: Visiting Italy without much notice (and therefore, not much planning) for a relative’s wedding. I still regret that.

The most exciting thing about your writing life: Being nominated for an Agatha award, being recognized for it, and winning it. I’ve had the honor to have books nominated eight times, but Charity’s Burden winning Best Historical Novel two years ago was such a thrill.

The one thing you wish you could do over in your writing life: I’d like to have started earlier. I have SO many stories to tell, and I’m not getting any younger.

Readers: What’s the most exciting thing about your job – or your life? Include your email address, because I’ll send one lucky commenter a signed copy of Batter Off Dead, my newest mystery, which released yesterday!

In South Lick, Indiana, fine foods and classic cookware can be found at Robbie Jordan’s Pans ’N Pancakes. Unfortunately, her country store also seems to stock up on murder . . .

Robbie and her new husband Abe O’Neill are enjoying a summer evening in the park with fellow townsfolk excited for some Friday night fireworks. In attendance are senior residents from Jupiter Springs Assisted Living including Roy Bird, father to South Lick’s very own Police Lieutenant Buck Bird. Despite his blindness, Roy is a member of his group home’s knitting circle, spending quality time with some lovely ladies.

But when the lightshow ends, one of the knitters who sat with Roy is found dead, a puncture wound in her neck. The poor woman’s death echoes that of Buck’s mother and Roy’s wife—an unsolved homicide. To help find the killer, Robbie’s going to have to untangle the knotty relationships deep in the victim’s past . . .

About Maddie:

Maddie Day pens the Country Store Mysteries and Cozy Capers Book Group Mysteries. As Agatha Award-winning author Edith Maxwell, she writes the Quaker Midwife Mysteries, the Local Foods Mysteries, and short crime fiction. Day/Maxwell lives with her beau north of Boston, where she writes, gardens, cooks, and wastes time on Facebook.

Find her at EdithMaxwell.com, wickedauthors.com, Mystery Lovers’ Kitchen, and on social media:

Twitter

Facebook

Instagram


Ideas for Tightening up Your Manuscript - Tips for Authors

Self-editing is probably my least favorite of all the writing tasks, but it, along with the other proofreading and revising steps, are the most important to your manuscript. Here are some ideas of ways to tighten your work and make it more polished before you send out queries. You often only get one shot with an agent or publisher, so your manuscript needs to be the best it possibly can.

  • Read the dialogue out loud. If you don’t want to be the reader, use the “Read Aloud” function on Microsoft Word’s Review tab. You will often hear things that need to be adjusted.

  • Look at your dialog. Make sure it moves your story forward. Remove the chitchat if it doesn’t add to the story. Fluffy filler needs to go.

  • Review your dialog tags (he said/she said). Use the Goldilocks method. You need what’s just right (not too many and not too few). The reader needs to know who the speaker is, but every line doesn’t need a tag.

  • Look for places where the action is mundane. If you are bored, your readers will be too.

  • Print out a copy of your manuscript and read it chapter by chapter. You will see more mistakes on paper than you will on the screen.

  • Use your spell checker to catch extra spaces and typos.

  • Search for “be” verbs (is/was/were…). Try to substitute a stronger verb. These are usually parts where you’re doing a lot of telling and not showing.

  • Look for examples of passive voice and make those sentences active.

  • Review long paragraphs and make sure all the detail adds to your story. Backstory (your character’s history) is important, but it needs to be sprinkled in. Long chucks of history read like a police report or a data dump. They take the reader out of the story’s action.

  • Look at the action in your story. You do not need to describe every single step and thing that your characters encounter. If your story is about your character flying to Europe, you really don’t need to tell us about all the things she does to get to the airport unless it is key to the work.

  • Make a list of your overused words We all have our favorites. Mine are “just” and “that.” During my editing, I search for these and replace or delete as many as I can.

  • Pay attention to the details. If you rename or change something, make sure you’ve removed or updated all references. I beta-read a few chapters for someone the other day, and this person had two different names for the main character and two different spellings of one of the names.

To me, editing is harder than writing, but it is so important to the overall project. What else would you add to my list?

#ThisorThatThursday Author Interview with Kristin Kisska

I am so excited to welcome the amazing Kristin Kisska to the blog for #ThisorThatThursday!

Things you need when you’re in your writing cave:

I always have some sort of beverage near me in my writing cave, usually coffee, tea, or water. Sometimes I have more than one at hand!

Things that distract you from writing:

Noise, such as voices and music, keeps me from entering my writing zone. Oh, and social media is a huge temptation for me, but one that I have a hard time managing.

Hardest thing about being a writer:

Staring at a blank page with no idea what to write next, especially if you are writing on a deadline. Writer’s block is very real, and I dread the experience. I’m grateful it doesn’t happen very often, but when it does, my blood pressure escalates.

Easiest thing about being a writer:

Those rare, blissful moments when your characters hijack the story take over. Then, you are no longer creating the story but recording it as best as you can while it unfolds in new directions you hadn’t planned. The best part is that these writerly waves usually require the least amount of revising later on.

Things you will run to the store for at midnight:

Coffee grounds, especially if I don’t have enough to make a pot the next morning!

Things you never put on your shopping list:

Soda.

Favorite snacks:

Cheese, cheese, and cheese. My favorite type is brie, which I enjoy on pretzel chips, sandwiches, omelets, and even straight up by itself. Oh, did I mention cheese?

Things that make you want to gag:

I can’t stomach olives or liver. Yuck!

Something you’re really good at:

Parallel parking. I lived in Chicago for five years and learned how to street park the hard way.

Something you’re really bad at:

I can’t pronounce *epidemiologist* on the first try. EVER. And it’s been a fairly common word these past couple of years, for obvious reasons.

Something you wanted to be when you were a kid:

As a kid, I always wanted to be a veterinarian. In high school, I was able to volunteer at a local (human) hospital and changed my career aspirations to be a doctor. All it took was one chemistry lecture in college to reject medicine in general.

Something you do that you never dreamed you’d do:

A writer! I ended up majoring in business and even got my MBA. I worked on Wall Street and have owned a marketing firm for almost twenty years. So, about fifteen years ago, discovering that I had a story (actually many stories) to tell was a shock to my system, but here we are…I’m very grateful for my writerly muse!

Something you wish you could do:

I’d love to be able to whistle through my fingers—the really loud whistle. I’ve been attempting for years but still can’t get the hang of it, even by accident.

Something you wish you’d never learned to do:

Sewing buttons. I somehow became the button-sewer-oner in my family & I quit!

Things to say to an author:

I can’t wait to buy/read your (upcoming) book. Can you talk to my book club? I just loved your (insert story title).

Things to say to an author if you want to be fictionally killed off in their next book:

“You write fiction? What do you do for real?” Or, “Anyone can write a novel.”

Best thing you’ve ever done:

After college, I bought a one-way flight ticket to Prague. I ended up finding a job and lived there for three years. The best part was I got to travel all over Europe while I stayed there. My family and friends all thought I was crazy for doing it, but they all ended up visiting me and touring Prague anyway. I guess I got the last laugh.

Biggest mistake:

I turned down an offer to spend six months in Australia with my cousins while my uncle was on sabbatical. It meant I would’ve had to delay starting college by a year. Back then, a gap year wasn’t as common as now. Years later, I had the opportunity to visit Down Under and learned exactly what I’d missed by not saying “yes.”

The nicest thing a reader said to you:

“I wish I’d written your story.” This was from an author I idolized, so the compliment was especially meaningful.

The craziest thing a reader said to you:

A critique partner once read the first third of my draft novel and commented that nothing was happening in the story. The comment made more sense once I realized he was expecting the story to be a high-stakes thriller, not a slow burn suspense novel, but still…a lot was going on in the story. Ouch!

The most exciting thing about your writing life:

I absolutely adore book signing events. They make me feel like Cinderella at the ball.

The one thing you wish you could do over in your writing life:

After writing and polishing my first novel, I focused my time on researching and querying literary agents. In retrospect, I wish I’d continued writing during those months as it would’ve offered me both a distraction from what is a deflating process and a new manuscript to shop around sooner. At the end of the day, though, I found my writerly home with The Stringer Literary Agency, so everything worked out for the best.

About Kristin:

Kristin Kisska used to be a finance geek, complete with MBA and Wall Street pedigree, but now she is a self-proclaimed fictionista. Kristin contributed short suspense stories to nine anthologies, including Malice Domestic’s Agatha Award-winning anthology, MYSTERY MOST EDIBLE (2018). She’ll be releasing her tenth short story, “Vendetta by the Sea” in VIRGINIA IS FOR MYSTERIES: VOL III in February 2022.

Kristin is a member of International Thriller Writers, Women’s Fiction Writers Association, James River Writers, and is the Vice President of the Central Virginia chapter of Sisters in Crime. When not penning suspense novels, she can be found reading murdery books while cuddling with her kitty. Kristin lives in Richmond, Virginia with her family.

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#WriterWednesday Interview with Jackie Layton

I’d like to welcome the fabulous Jackie Layton to the blog for #WriterWednesday. I love this series!

Favorite thing to do when you have free time: I love to hang out at the beach, and we now live withing five minutes of the beach. I enjoy walking, looking for shells, watching for dolphins, and just sitting and reading a good book.

The thing you’ll always move to the bottom of your to do list: In my job as a pharmacist, I’ve spent hours on the phone. At home, I’ll put off making a phone call as long as possible (except to my family).

Things you need when you’re in your writing cave: I write better if I’m showered and dressed for the day. I must have coffee or tea beside me.

Things that distract you from writing: Heinz, my Westie, likes to distract me. Social media is also distracting, especially if I’m stuck on a plot point.

Hardest thing about being a writer: Not getting your feelings hurt. You’ve got to be able to deal with rejection and criticism.

Easiest thing about being a writer: Brainstorming is the easiest and most fun thing about writing.

Things you will run to the store for at midnight: Rocky Road ice cream.

Things you never put on your shopping list: Jerky. I don’t even like the smell of it.

Favorite snacks: Pretzels or pecans.

Things that make you want to gag: It’s one of my husband’s favorite snacks, but Nacho Cheese Doritos make me want to gag.

Something you’re really good at: I feel like I’m a good encourager. I love to encourage people to follow their dreams, and I’ll cheer them on to victory.

Something you’re really bad at: Confrontation.

Something you wanted to be when you were a kid: My dad was a pharmacist, and he inspired me.

Something you do that you never dreamed you’d do: I always dreamed of being an author but didn’t believe I could write. Finally, I decided I’d regret not trying. It took years, but it has been a thrill to get published.

Last best thing you ate: A chocolate Parlor donut. It’s a layered croissant with chocolate glaze.

Last thing you regret eating: Beef stew. Don’t ask for details. Haha

The most embarrassing thing that happened to you on a vacation: I was in the ocean on another beach vacation and got a hooked stuck in my toe. It was a big hook with lots of weights hanging off it. The tide was coming in, and the weights got buried under the sand, and I couldn’t life my foot. Finally, another wave came and I could life my foot, but all the weights were dangling and pulling against my skin. Two people helped me get to the beach. Everyone walking by had a suggestion for how to get it out, and they all sounded painful. A beach cop came on his golf cart and drove me to the nearest exit from the beach. My husband drove me to the emergency room wearing my swimsuit and a coverup.

The funniest thing that happened to you on vacation: We ate at our favorite restaurant on vacation. You walk in, order, leave your name, and pay on the way out. Our young son said we should be creative and not leave our boring name. So, we said Superman. The lady taking our order laughed and wrote down Superman. Hours later, we were sitting on the beach, and my husband asked if I’d paid for lunch. We both forgot and had to drive back to the restaurant and pay for Superman’s lunch.

The most exciting thing about your writing life: Signing with my wonderful agent Dawn Dowdle was the most exciting thing. She’s nice and down to earth, and she’s great at her job.

The one thing you wish you could do over in your writing life: Before meeting Dawn, I had another agent string me along for over two years. She had me change multiple stories and kept saying I needed to write more like one of her authors. I wasted a lot of time believing that agent would sign me.

About the Book:

When a scavenger hunt turns up a dead body, dog walker Andi Grace Scott will have to make a dogged effort to collar the culprit . . .

Setting out for a day of fun on her town’s first-ever scavenger hunt, Low Country dog walker Andi Grace Scott is dismayed to find an unattended dog wandering the streets—but that’s nothing compared to the shock she gets when she finds a dead man floating in the swimming pool of the dog’s owner. What’s more, she’d seen the very same man having a very public altercation with his wife just the night before. Despite being warned off the case by the local sheriff, Andi Grace can’t help nosing around to find out who’s behind the foul deed.

It turns out the victim was a well-known radio personality who focused on cold-case investigations and was rumored to be breaking a huge story on his next show. As Andi Grace digs deeper to learn who may have wanted him dead, she’s faced with a suspect list that includes a cold-hearted widow who stands to inherit a bundle, a local country star with family demons to hide, and any number of unknown criminals who may have been the focus of the victim’s big reveal. Whether the motive was love gone bad, a career under duress, or a killer’s deadly secret, Andi Grace knows she’ll have to act fast before she becomes the next cold case herself . . .

Praise for the Books of Jackie Layton

“Andi Grace is adorable, resilient, and has a doggedly curious need to solve a murder. A pleasure to read.” —C. Hope Clark, award-winning author of Edisto Tidings

“Completely charming—and exactly what a cozy mystery should be. Amateur sleuth (and dog whisperer) Andi Grace Scott is wonderfully endearing, and her devotion to her pooches—and to justice—will have you rooting for her from the absolutely irresistible page one.  Bow wow—What a terrific debut!”  —Hank Phillippi Ryan, nationally best-selling and award-winning author of  The Murder List

“I promptly fell head over heels for this cast of characters, and the dogs burrowed quickly into my heart. The plot of Bite the Dust was intriguing and complex, with plenty of surprising twists and turns. What impressed me the most, though, was the warm tone of the author’s writing voice . . . you just want to snuggle in and keep reading.” —MeezCarrie

About Jackie:

Former Kentuckian Jackie Layton loves her new life in the Low Country. She enjoys time on the beach, despite one vacation that ended with cracked ribs from riding her boogie board with the kids and another trip that ended with a fish hook in her foot and a trip to the emergency room. There’s nothing like time at the beach, although she tends to be a bit more cautious these days. Jackie is the author of four Low Country Dog Walker Mysteries, including Bite the DustDog-Gone Dead, Bag of Bones, and Caught and Collared.

 Let’s Be Social:

Former Kentuckian Jackie Layton loves her new life in the Low Country. She enjoys time on the beach, despite one vacation that ended with cracked ribs from riding her boogie board with the kids and another trip that ended with a fish hook in her foot and a trip to the emergency room. There’s nothing like time at the beach, although she tends to be a bit more cautious these days. Jackie is the author of four Low Country Dog Walker Mysteries, including Bite the DustDog-Gone Dead, Bag of Bones, and Caught and Collared.

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Jackie Layton Caught and Collared available Feb 15 (@Joyfuljel) / Twitter

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Book links:

Amazon:  https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09Q97LD5M?ref_=pe_3052080_276849420

B&N: https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/caught-and-collared-jackie-layton/1140871860?ean=2940161056226

Google Play:  https://play.google.com/store/books/details/Jackie_Layton_Caught_and_Collared?id=IdJYEAAAQBAJ&hl=en

Apple iBooks: https://books.apple.com/us/book/caught-and-collared/id1604628619 

Kobo:  https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/caught-and-collared-1

Smashwords: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1126350

 

The Church Hill Train Disaster and VIRGINIA IS FOR MYSTERIES 3

My story, “Derailed,” appears in the third edition of Virginia is for Mysteries. In it, sassy, private investigator, Delanie Fitzgerald, gets more than she bargains for when sleezy strip club owner and her best, cash-paying client, Chaz Smith, hires her to find out who’s blackmailing him and his buddies. She and her partner, Duncan Reynolds, have to find out what happened one summer evening twenty years ago and what it has to do with the Church Hill Tunnel cave-in. While trying to figure out the connection to the spooky, abandoned site where the train and several victims lie buried beneath a busy Richmond neighborhood, Delanie discovers the origin of Chaz’s mysterious teardrop face tattoo.

I have been fascinated with the Church Hill Disaster for years. The train and several of the crew were walled inside the tunnel when it became too dangerous to continue recovery efforts. It lies beneath the Church Hill neighborhood of Richmond. Both ends of the tunnel have been sealed, and you could drive by them and not ever realize what lies within. Today, one end is in the courtyard of an upscale condominium community, and the other, several miles away, is in an overgrown, forgotten area covered in weeds, debris, and standing water.

The events of 1925 have spawned all kinds of ghost stories, legends, and theories. People who live atop the hill talk about the characteristic “Church Hill Lean” that some of the structures have because of shifts in the tunnel below, and there have been cases of building collapses through the years.

In my story, I added another body to the tragic memorial. In my fictious account, readers learn how sleezy strip club owner, Chaz Wellington Smith, III acquired his infamous, teardrop tattoo.

Virginia is for Mysteries III launches February 16, 2022. It is available for preorder in paperback, hardback, or ebook.

#ThisorThatThursday Author Interview with Paul Bahou

I’d like to welcome author, Paul Bahou, to the blog for #ThisorThatThursday!

Things you need for your writing sessions:

I write and edit my books on my computer, but I write my short stories on my phone. All I need is one or the other and some quiet so I can focus.

Things that hamper your writing:

TV, other people, anything that takes me out of the zone.

Things you love about writing:

Writing clears the cobwebs of the mind. You get so much mental clutter and junk over the course of the day, especially for someone like me who has a short attention span. It’s almost like meditation in a way; forcing my brain to hone in on a single train of thought for an extended period of time.

There’s also this creative itch that I have to scratch, or I go batty. I used to satisfy it by playing and writing music. Since I’ve had kids that’s been pretty difficult, so writing stories has been a very satisfying way of engaging with that call to create.

Things you hate about writing:

That I don’t get to do more of it. I have a list of story summaries on my phone that I work on when I get the time. I’m currently working on a series of short stories to release as a collection. I’m usually working on two different stories at any given time, one that’s being written on my phone and one that’s being edited on my computer.

Easiest thing about being a writer:

Writing the first sentence.

Hardest thing about being a writer:

Writing everything that comes after that.

Favorite music or song:

My favorite band in the world is Tool. Their music just hits me in a way that nobody else’s does. It’s heavy, it’s melodic, it’s lyrically dense and damn if they don’t sound absolutely flawless live. Their album Lateralus changed the way I look at music.

My second favorite is Carly Rae Jepson. She writes the musical equivalent of warm hugs you can dance to. I love her music. I know it’s the furthest thing from progressive metal, but aren’t we all full of contradictions in some way?

Music that drives you crazy:

100 Gecs is the group that made me realize I was old. And I’m not even old. I just can’t do whatever that is. My brain just isn’t wired for it.

Favorite beverage:

Coffee.

Something that gives you a sour face:

Anything with too much sugar in it.

Favorite smell:

Your kid when they’re a newborn and you smell their head. No greater high my friend. Fellow parents, you know what I’m talking about.

Something that makes you hold your nose:

Meat. I don’t think I’ve eaten a cheeseburger since George W. Bush was president.

Last best thing you ate:

The tacos my wife made for dinner last night. The woman is Mozart in the kitchen.

Last thing you regret eating:

That fourth taco. Oof.

Favorite places you’ve been:

I love Coachella. There’s magic in those polo fields. I really love music festivals in general. I’ve got a pretty wide palate when it comes to music, so I appreciate being to check out different types of artists in a fun, vibrant setting.

Places you never want to go to again:

I’ll go anywhere as long as I’ve got my wife with me. It’s less about the place and more about the company. I think that’s the trick to living a good life in general.

Favorite books (or genre):

I love authors like Kurt Vonnegut or Chuck Palahniuk. People who tell stories out of left field that defy typical plot line conventions.

Books you wouldn’t buy:

Anything written by someone with an opinion show on a cable news channel.

Favorite things to do:

Write music. Write stories. Talk about music. Talk about stories. Watch music. Watch stories. My novel Sunset Distortion is a story that heavily involves music. I’d say I found a way to mix my two favorite things.

Things you’d run through a fire or eat bugs to get out of doing:

I’d say running through a fire and eating bugs are two things I’d like to avoid if possible.

Things that make you happy:

My children

Things that drive you crazy:

My children

The coolest person you’ve ever met:

My wife.

The celebrity who didn’t look like he/she did in pictures/video:

I once saw Justin Timberlake when I was coming out of the bathroom at the Laugh Factory in Hollywood. My friends and I were in college and seeing Dane Cook. We were all hammered. And not just hammered, but like, irresponsible college level wasted. Justin was in line waiting for me to come out. He was taller than I imagined. Though then again, I was pretty inebriated, it’s very possible I was slouching like some sort of confused hunchback who stumbled into the light after years in the belfry. I wanted to say hi, but I think I just grumbled incoherently at the poor guy.

About Paul:

Paul Bahou is the author of Sunset Distortion: The Pyramid at the End of the World. He holds a B.A. in Political Science from Cal State University Long Beach with a minor in Music. He began his career writing grants while playing in his rock band, eventually moving out of music and into the sustainability sector. He lives in Southern California with his wife Melissa, daughter Sophie and son Harrison. He writes fiction and the occasional dad joke in his spare time.

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