What Grover Taught Me about Writing Mysteries

I am GenX, first-generation Sesame Street and first-generation MTV. One of my favorite children’s books was the classic, The Monster at the End of This Book.

Here’s what Grover taught me about writing mysteries.

  • You need to build suspense to keep your readers engaged.

  • Your readers need to like or empathize with your protagonist.

  • Everyone is afraid of something, and writers need to tap into fears to build tension.

  • Write strong (and fun) dialog. Make it sound like real speech, slang and all.

  • Use pacing correctly. Slow down the action to build suspense, and speed it up to amp up the excitement.

  • Your protagonist needs a challenge or a problem to solve.

  • Your character should not be perfect. Little (or big) flaws make your protagonist relatable and interesting.

  • Make sure your character is not flat. He or she needs to be a real person (or monster) with all the things that life throws in the way. Your protagonist needs to stumble and make mistakes.

  • When you think your character has had enough and is close to breaking, pile it on. Add more tension.

  • Don’t load up your work with a lot of narrative and back story. Readers want to stay in the action.

  • And most importantly, never forget that reading is fun.

Who’s your favorite Muppet?

#ThisorThatThursday Author Interview with Sheryl Jordan

I’d like to welcome my friend, Sheryl Jordan, to the blog for #ThisorThatThursday!

Things you never want to run out of: I never want to run out of Toilet paper, coffee, and wine.

Things you wish you had never bought: In 1991, I wish I had never bought a 1975 Jeep Wagoner.

The hardest part about being a writer is the many rounds of editing required to create the “perfect story.”

Easiest thing about being a writer: The easiest thing about being a writer is creating characters.

Things you need for your writing sessions: I need my laptop, coffee or wine (depending on the time of day), and the internet.

Things that hamper your writing: Procrastination, distractions from family.

A few of your favorite things: I love fresh ground French Roast coffee with hazelnut creamer in the mornings, a glass (or two or three) of chilled Chardonnay in the evenings, and spending time with family and friends anytime.

Things you need to throw out: I need to throw out shoes and clothes I’ve had for over ten years, which I will never wear again.

Words that describe you: Loving, caring, considerate, fun to be around. creative

Words that describe you, but you wish they didn’t: Procrastinator, dramatic (according to my daughter 😊).

Favorite foods: My favorite food is grilled medium well ribeye steaks with a garden salad topped with olive oil and fresh ground pepper.

Things that make you want to gag: Things that make me want to gag are liver and salmon

Favorite smell: My favorite smells are green peppers, onions, and celery being sauteed, the smell of rain before it actually rains, and most flowers.

Something that makes you hold your nose: Spoiled milk.

Things you always put in your books: I always put a murder in my books.

Things you never put in your books: Mystical creatures.

Things to say to an author: I loved your story and characters.

Things to say to an author if you want to be fictionally killed off in their next book: I hate your story.

People you’d like to invite to dinner: President Barrack and First Lady Michelle Obama.

People you’d cancel dinner on: People who are arrogant, egotistical, or self-centered people.

The nicest thing a reader said to you: I just read your story, and all I have to say is keep on writing. It was a great story, and I loved your characters.

The craziest thing a reader said to you: “Your book was really good and should be made into a movie, but I don’t like the ending. You should have changed the ending.” Me: My novel was inspired by actual events.”, Reader: “I guess that wouldn’t have worked then.”

Besides writing, what’s the most creative thing you’ve done: Designed our family room remodel at our prior home. It was beautiful. We sold our house two months later.

A project that didn’t quite turn out the way you planned it: When I was a teenager, I liked to sew. My father asked me to make one of his long-sleeved dress shirts short-sleeved. I cut the sleeves off too much, and it looked like a dressy muscle shirt.

Some real-life story that made it to one of your books: My story, “Stalked By Her Past”, in the First Come Love, Then Comes Murder anthology, a character is stalked by a man for months. He keeps watching her house and following her. I experienced an incident just as creepy when a man I didn’t know was watching me while working at home during the Covid shutdown. I scared him off when I looked up and screamed. I went to the front door to ensure it was locked, and he ran off. He returned three more times that we know about, and I’m sure he approached me at Walgreens a few blocks from my home a couple of weeks later.

Something in your story that readers think is about you, but it’s not: Some think I drive a Mercedes Benz because it is my car of choice for most of my main characters. I don’t and never have…yet. 😊

About Sheryl:

Sheryl Jordan is a fictional mystery author. She wrote Manipulation, Money, and Murder, a fictional novel based on true crimes. She has stories in Virginia for Mysteries III, Coastal Crimes, First Comes Love, Then Comes Murder, and several stories in anthologies coming soon. Sheryl is currently working on a female truck driver mystery series. By day, she is a mutual funds accountant and corporate reporter. In her “spare time,” she enjoys traveling, watching professional football and basketball, and spending time with family. She resides in a small town in Virginia with her family.

Let’s Be Social:

Author website: https://sheryl-jordan.com/

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/SherylJordanAuthor

Twitter/X: https://x.com/SherylJ79644

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/sheryljordanaurthor/

20 Things about My Sleuth Jade Hicks

I’m currently working on book 5 of the Mermaid Bay Christmas Shoppe Mysteries, and I’ve been thinking a lot about my amateur sleuth, Jade Hicks, lately. Here are 20 things you may not know about her and her stories.

  1. She’s a redhead.

  2. She drives a lime-green Jeep Wrangler.

  3. Her personalized license plates are “NO GRNCH.” Perfect for the owner of a Christmas store.

  4. Mermaid Bay isn’t a real place. I created my cozy little beach town near the Historic Triangle of Jamestown, Williamsburg, and Yorktown.

  5. She was born in 1985 and graduated high school in 2003.

  6. She graduated from James Madison University in 2007.

  7. Before returning to Mermaid Bay, she worked in Richmond, VA at a marketing firm.

  8. She moved back to the beach when her grandmother passed to take over the store.

  9. Jade originally moved in with her grandparents when her parents were killed in a tragic car accident.

  10. Jade has known Nick Driscoll since middle school.

  11. Right before the pandemic, Jade made a huge investment in the store’s online store, and it paid off when the world went on lockdown.

  12. Jade owns the vacant lot next to her store. She hasn’t decided quite what to do with the property.

  13. There is a lovely hedge of oleanders along the back of her store and the vacant lot, and it plays a key role in Twinkle Twinkle Au Revoir.

  14. Jade attends her first ComicCon with her bestie Amy Pemberton in Life is But a Scream (January 2026).

  15. The beach is Jade’s happy place.

  16. Chloe, the Frenchie, and Neville the Devil Cat pretend to be enemies, but they really are pals and playmates.

  17. Jade loves visiting Amy’s bookstore where Darcy Cat watches over the stacks. The Persian is named for Mr. Darcy.

  18. Jade’s aunt, the free-spirited Lorelei Tucker, keeps a protective eye on her niece and helps her out whenever she can.

  19. In A Tisket A Tasket Not Another Casket, (January 2025) Jade’s a little surprised to learn a secret about Amy’s love life. No spoilers here.

  20. The titles of the books in Jade’s series are named for nursery rhymes gone bad.

#ThisorThatThursday Author Interview with Jenna Harte

I’d like to welcome my friend, Jenna Harte, to the blog for #ThisorThatThursday!

Things you never want to run out of: Chocolate, books, coffee, wine

Things you wish you’d never bought: I have a lot of doodads I bought thinking they’d make my life easier (e.g. wet-dry vac, kitchen appliances), but I don’t use. What I really want is someone else to clean and cook.

Hardest thing about being a writer: Being stuck, not knowing what to write next in the story. This happens a lot to me in Act 2a through the second pinch point. I can write act one and three no problem, it’s the middle that I struggle with.

Easiest thing about being a writer: Getting paid to make up stories. The flexible schedule is nice too.

A few of your favorite things: I love books, notebooks, and planners, even though I’m drowning in them.

Things you need to throw out: So much stuff. Some of it I wonder where it came from and why it’s in my house.

Favorite foods: Chocolate and Mexican food.

Things that make you want to gag: Pears. Just the smell of them makes me nauseous. I suspect I was sick as a child and given a pear leading to a Pavlovian response. I’m not a fan of eggplant either.

Favorite music or song: I love “Ode to Joy” and “A Little Jazz Mass.” I think they’re amazingly beautiful. I also love old R&B and electric swing music. I’m actually quite eclectic in my musical interests (pop, jazz, classical, etc).

Music that drives you crazy: I’m not a fan of music that sounds like noise and screaming (hard, hard rock?).

The last thing you ordered online: Naughty Words for Nice Writers by Cara Bristol (it’s a romance writing thesaurus) and Save the Cat Writes for TV by Jamie Nash (I bought that to help me write serial fiction).

The last thing you regret buying: Surface steam cleaner…another doodad I thought would make my life easier. I haven’t used it once.

Favorite books (or genre): I love Persuasion by Jane Austen. I also love The House at the Cerulean Sea. My go-to genre is usually mystery/thriller/suspense and romance (rom com and romantic suspense).

Books you wouldn’t buy: I’m not a big literature reader as I don’t like that they don’t end well or have a nebulous ending.

Most daring thing you’ve ever done: I ate haggis and black pudding on a recent trip to the UK. The haggis wasn’t bad as long as I didn’t think about what was in it. The black pudding was like a hockey puck.

Something you chickened out from doing: I won’t do anything that requires me to “white knuckle” through it. So while I did zip line, I didn’t white water raft on my last trip to the New River Gorge.

The coolest person you’ve ever met: I’ve been lucky to meet some cool authors such as Charlaine Harris and Heather Graham. I sat next to Mark Greaney at a book signing at Thrillerfest, and he was really nice. I’ve met and chatted with Robert Wagner and Stefanie Powers on several occasions (if anyone remembers them). Wagner sent me a handwritten thank you note after donating to a charity he supported. I got a note from Stefanie after donating to her wildlife fund and giving her a bottle of moonshine for her birthday.

The celebrity who didn’t look like he/she did in pictures/video: Sissy Spacek used to live in the area, but I didn’t recognize her when I saw her.

The nicest thing a reader said to you: “I luvvvvvv your books.”

The craziest thing a reader said to you: “You’re some kind of crazy.” It was said to me after a panel I was on at the Suffolk Mystery Festival. I don’t know why he thought that, but it was said good-naturedly, so I took it as a compliment.

Besides writing, what’s the most creative thing you’ve done: I used make all my kids’ birthday cakes (fire engines, Neverland island, etc) and Halloween costumes. I like to do art/crafty things but I’m not very good. I have made some of my own merch, like tumblers with my book covers on them.

A project that didn’t quite turn out the way you planned it: Nearly everything I try to create looks better in my head than the result. The worst has probably been the times I tried to use decorative painting in my bathroom.

Some real-life story that made it to one of your books: My husband told me about a man who sells homemade moonshine from the trunk of his car at their work (which is illegal)…they work at a prison. I put that in Meant to Be, a romantic suspense I wrote in the Southern Heat series.

Something in your story that readers think is about you, but it’s not: I have a character in the Valentine Mysteries that likes to wear couture French lingerie. I don’t but mostly because I can’t afford it.

About Jenna:

Jenna Harte is a die-hard romantic writing about characters who are passionate about and committed to each other, and frequently getting into trouble. She is the author of the Valentine Mysteries, the first of which, Deadly Valentine, reached the quarter-finals in Amazon's Breakthrough Novel Award in 2013. She also penned the Southern Heat contemporary romance series and the Sophie Parker Coupon Mystery series.

When she's not telling stories, she works by day as a ghostwriter and runs the online community for romance writers, Write with Harte. She lives the empty nest life with her soulmate and a nutty cat.

Let’s Be Social:

Website: https://jennaharte.com

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/JennaHarteAuthor/

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jennaharteauthor/

Ream Stories: https://reamstories.com/jennaharte/public

Recent Writing Gems

I’ve attended a bunch of classes and seminars lately, and here are some of the gems that I picked up that can help writers…

Writing Dialog with Andrea Johnson:

  • Johnson reminded writers that dialog is more than just a conversation. It advances the plot and establishes the tone.

  • Dialog is faster for readers to process than narrative, and it’s a way to show the point of view and personalities of your characters.

  • She suggested that authors avoid long physical descriptions of characters in dialog.

  • Johnson also suggested that writers avoid having characters having long philosophical discussions with themselves.

Podcasts to Add to Your Favorites’ List:

  • Pick Your Poison

  • Dark Predators

  • Murder in the Hollywood Hills

  • Missing in America

  • Check out Sarah E. Burr’s post on Writers Who Kill about her favorite true crime podcasts.

Book Marketing:

  • Book Funnel is a way that authors can distribute their ARCs (Advance Reader/Review Copies) and book giveaways to readers.

  • It does require a subscription, and several tiered options are available. Make sure you review the features available with each plan.

  • Some plans have options for authors to join newsletter swaps, email builders, and book sales with other authors. This is a way to expand your audience and add followers to your email list.

#ThisorThatThursday Author Interview with Lorie Lewis Ham

I would like to welcome the fabulous Lorie Lewis Ham back to the blog for #ThisorThat Thursday!

Favorite thing to do when you have free time: Watch TV with my kids or go to a coffee shop and read.

The thing you’ll always move to the bottom of your to do list: Anything involving calling people. I do not like talking on the phone.

Things you need when you’re in your writing cave: Notebooks and pens for jotting down thoughts that come to me as I write and good coffee!

Things that distract you from writing: Noise, phone calls, and pets wanting to be fed lol.

Hardest thing about being a writer: Waiting for those first reviews hoping readers like your book!

Easiest thing about being a writer: Coming up with the basic ideas for a book usually come pretty easily for me.

Things you will run to the store for at midnight: Pepsi!

Things you never put on your shopping list: Fresh fish. I love eating it but can’t get myself to make it.

The coolest thing you’ve bought online: A replica of Excalibur.

The thing you wished you’d never bought. The second car we bought after we were married. I can’t even remember what it was but it was in the shop all the time!

Favorite snacks: I love Snickerdoodles, Bugles, and pretzels.

Things that make you want to gag: Ketchup on eggs and sweet pickle relish.

Something you’re really good at: Interviewing people.

Something you’re really bad at: Drawing.

Something you wanted to be when you were a kid: I have always wanted to be a writer for as long as I can remember.

Something you do that you never dreamed you’d do: Publish my own magazine.

Something you wish you could do: Write for TV.

Something you wish you’d never learned to do: This is really tough—maybe prepare my own taxes? It is a nightmare doing it every year but it’s too expensive to pay someone.

Last best thing you ate: Parmesan/Garlic wings at Wingstop.

Last thing you regret eating: A really spicy chicken wing lol.

Things to say to an author: I really loved your last book and can’t wait for the next one.

Things to say to an author if you want to be fictionally killed off in their next book: You really should have done this in your book (insert some sort of criticism that shows you do not have a clue about this type of book)

Favorite places you’ve been: Santa Cruz, CA—I love the ocean.

Places you never want to go to again: Needles, CA—I hate the desert.

Favorite things to do: Read, travel, watch TV, and hang out in coffee shops.

Things you’d run through a fire or eat bugs to get out of doing: I hate yardwork!

Most daring thing you’ve ever done: When I was newly married, I had never driven any farther than about an hour away and was kind of nervous about driving. Back then I was traveling and singing (I used to sing gospel music) and at the last minute my ride bailed, and I had to go this city on the coast that required driving over some mountains (I am terrified of heights), and I had no choice but to drive myself. Scared me to death! I still hate driving in the mountains, but I have pretty much driven all over the state now many times.

Something you chickened out from doing: I had the chance to do a phone interview with Rob Bell, who is one of my favorite non-fiction authors and speakers and the combination of hating talking on the phone and being afraid I would just blank since I’m such a fan, I asked if I could do an email interview instead.

The most exciting thing about your writing life: Opening the first box of a brand new book that I have written!

The one thing you wish you could do over in your writing life: Sign a contract with my first publisher—they ended up being a nightmare! I wish I would have kept looking until I found a good one.

The nicest thing a reader said to you: I couldn’t put your book down!

The craziest thing a reader said to you: Your characters eat too much.

Best piece of advice you received from another writer: Never give up.

Something you would tell a younger you about your writing: Write what you want to write, don’t worry about trends or rules because they are always changing.

Recommendations for curing writer’s block: Just sit down and write even if you throw it all out it can help you get going again.

Things you do to avoid writing: I never do anything to avoid writing mysteries, but I am really bad about putting off my non-fiction writing until the last minute lol. Clean, run errands, watch TV.

About Lorie and Her Socials:

Lorie Lewis Ham lives in Reedley, California and has been writing ever since she was a child. Her first song and poem were published when she was 13, and she has gone on to publish many articles, short stories, and poems throughout the years, as well as write for a local newspaper, and publish 7 mystery novels. For the past 14 years, Lorie has been the editor-in-chief and publisher of Kings River Life Magazine, and she produces Mysteryrat’s Maze Podcast, where you can hear an excerpt of her book One of Us, the first in a new series called The Tower District Mysteries. Book 2, One of You, was released in June of 2024. You can learn more about Lorie and her writing on her website mysteryrat.com and find her on Facebook, BookBub, Goodreads, and Instagram @krlmagazine & @lorielewishamauthor.


#WriterWednesday Interview with K. L. Murphy

I’d like to welcome my friend and one of my favorite suspense writers, K. L. Murphy to the blog for #WriterWednesday.

Things you never want to run out of: Books, tea, and wine—a trifecta of happiness—and preferably all while at the beach.

Things you wish you’d never bought: Half my closet probably. At any one point in time, I wonder why I bought that dress, shirt, or pair of shoes that I never wear.

Hardest thing about being a writer: For me, the most difficult part to manage is that there are no established “office hours.” Also, when I first started writing, I was working from home before working from home became a thing. Because I had children, there weren’t any real boundaries. While you might not call someone when you know they’re at work, a writer’s hours are less known. Interruptions are normal and frequent.

Easiest thing about being a writer: The flexible hours (see above)! I can take my work anywhere any day of the week. All I need is a few hours and my laptop.

Things you need for your writing sessions: I can write with noise or in a quiet room. I can be in my office or at a coffee shop. I don’t have a special chair or notebook. What I need most is to turn off life’s distractions—especially when I have deadlines.

Things that hamper your writing: Those pesky distractions: laundry, dishes, dogs, email, scrolling…

A few of your favorite things: I don’t have many favorite things: a couple of pieces of jewelry that were gifts (mostly sentimental), some books from childhood, pictures/photo albums, and most of all, time with family, friends, and my amazing dogs!

Things you need to throw out: Everything in the back of every closet or drawer—out of sight, out of mind. This is also true of the pantry. I have to make myself clean it out or there could be some scary things back there! Also, no matter how many times you clean out your filing cabinets and office, it’s never really done. Weed-like, the paper and junk keeps coming back.

Favorite foods: Fruits, vegetables, seafood, anything spicy—almost everything really. There’s very little I don’t like or won’t eat.

Things that make you want to gag: The sight of liver does make me a little sick. My mother served it to us once because my father loved it. Once only! Truly, I think she sensed she might have a revolt if she tried that again. I also don’t love overly sweet foods.

Something you’re really good at: I don’t know about really good, but I’m a pretty good baker and decent cook. I also wouldn’t say I have a green thumb, but I’m a decent gardener.

Something you’re really bad at: Singing! Really bad. Ask anyone in my family.

Favorite smell: I have several favorite smells including the ocean, flowers, freshly cut grass, homemade cakes and breads, and most herbs—especially sage.

Something that makes you hold your nose: While I love the smell of flowers, perfumes that are supposed to be from gardenias are way too strong and cloying for me.

The last thing you ordered online: Sunscreen and dental floss

The last thing you regret buying: I regret that I haven’t bought anything online lately more interesting than sunscreen and dental floss.

Things you’d walk a mile for: To get my hair done. Hair appointments are NOT to be missed!

Things that make you want to run screaming from the room: People who talk over other people and bring every story back to themselves.

Favorite books (or genre): Rebecca is a book I go back to over and over. While I read almost every genre, more than 75% of what I read/listen to are mysteries and thrillers.

Books you wouldn’t buy: I appreciate all books but because there is only so much time in the day, I don’t typically buy magical realism, sweet romance, or science fiction. One might sneak in though😊

Besides writing, what’s the most creative thing you’ve done: The annual poems for the Halloween party invitations when the kids were young. I know that’s technically still writing, but it’s different!

A project that didn’t quite turn out the way you planned it: Absolutely anything needed for the classroom—I am craft challenged.

About K. L.:

K.L. Murphy is the author of Last Girl Missing (July 2024) the first in the Detective Callie Forde Mystery Series. She is also the author of the award-nominated Her Sister’s Death, a January 2023 Once Upon a Book Club Pick. Of Her Sister’s Death, Publishers Weekly said, “Murphy keeps the tension high…” and “readers will eagerly turn the pages” and Library Journal called the book “[A] riveting tale…”

In addition, she is the author of the Detective Cancini Mystery Series featuring A Guilty Mind, Stay of Execution, and The Last Sin. Her short stories are featured in several anthologies. K.L. makes her home in Richmond, VA, where she loves spending time with her family, friends, and two amazing dogs.

 Let’s Be Social:

Website: www.kellielarsenmurphy.com

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/k.l._murphy/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/klmurphyauthor

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/klmurphyauthor/

TikTok: https://www.tiktok.com/@klmurphyauthor

Bookbub: https://www.bookbub.com/authors/k-l-murphy

Email: kellielarsenmurphy@gmail.com

Getting the ROT out of Your Writing

I finished a seminar at the day gig on document management, and the focus was removing ROT - Redundant, Obsolete, and Trivial documents from your files. I would argue that you can do the same thing to improve your writing. Print out your manuscript, grab your editing pen, and read like a critic.

Redundant - Look for:

  • Places where you’ve repeated descriptions

  • Overused words and phrases (I have a list that I always check for.)

  • Too many uses of the character’s name or too many he/she pronouns

  • Dialog tags (he said/she said) that you don’t really need

Obsolete - Look for Outdated References to Technology:

  • It’s rare that anyone tapes or videotapes anything. Faxes are ancient unless it’s going to someone’s email. And people with electric car windows don’t roll or wind the window down. Old habits are hard to break.

  • I wrote myself in a corner one time with inked fingerprints. Most departments use a fingerprint scanner these days unless the computers are down.

  • Most people use their phones these days for just about everything. It’s rare if you see a camera, calculator, or a videorecorder. It’s also a lot of people’s only flashlight.

Trivial - Look for:

  • Chit chat. It’s nice to be friendly, but you don’t need a lot of the greetings and thank yous. Try to find spots where you can eliminate unnecessary chatter.

  • Descriptions or dialog that doesn’t relate to the action or the story. If it’s filler, get rid of it.

  • Big data dumps in your writing. These are usually detailed descriptions, too much backstory, or long narrative paragraphs. Eliminate what doesn’t move your story forward. You don’t want to take your reader outside of the story’s action.

What would you add to my list?